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Preparing for EOY English Compo :D (Suspicion)

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Preparing for EOY English Compo :D (Suspicion)


Postby LuckyToSnort on Tue Sep 28, 2010 2:38 am

    Suspicion

There was definitely something fishy going on, I thought. The voice at the other end of the telephone was forever a male and my mother spoke like a timid mouse that feared that she might get caught any moment. My father confirmed my suspicion, when one day, I saw a name card of a Private Investigator accidentally fell out from his wallet. I flushed with anger at that moment and jumped at the conclusion that my mother was cheating on my father and he was spying on her.

I was furious and at the same time curious to find out who that mysterious person was, I decided to trail my mother to the nearby shopping centre, which I had discovered was their meeting place when I eavesdropped on their conversation the night before. I hid in a corner and watched them from a distance while my mother waited patiently for the mysterious person in a café.

Just then, a young, handsome, immaculately dressed man approached my mother and began their conversation. I was shocked and at the same time disgusted that my mother was having an affair with a younger man. He looked ten years younger than her! They talked to affectionately as though they had known each other for years. Regardless of how shocked I was at that time, I still decided to spy on them for a little while more before confronting both of them. However, I found their subsequent behavior downright unacceptable when they started holding each other's hands and laughing away.

Fuming mad and unable to tolerate their shameless act any longer, I was on my way to storm into the restaurant when suddenly, someone tapped me on my shoulder. Much to my surprise, it was my father! "What are you doing here? Come join us." I was stunned and lost for words. My father then led me into the cafe, which I blindly followed, where my mother and her 'adulterer' were seating. 

"Hi, my long lost Brother-in=law!" I was completely in skepticism! Brother-in-law? What was going on? I thought to my self. We had dinner together and till then, I finally realized my suspicion was gratuitous and knew what was happening. The young handsome man was my mother's long lost brother and they had not seen each other for years.

My grandmother had given him away to a  rich relative when he was young as they were very poor. He was brought to the United States after that. That totally explained for their chatting during late nights due to the time difference between Singapore and the United States. Moreover, the private investigator was hired to trace him as it was my grandmother's last wish for my mother to be reunited with him and he had specially flown to Singapore to meet my mother and visit my grandmother at her grave.

I blushed in embarrassment while thinking of what damage my wild imagination could have done if I really were to confront them. I laughed at my own frivolous insecurity and most importantly, I was glad that my father stopped me just in time and my family had a great time. They were totally incognizant of my suspicion and I heaved a sigh of relief. 
Last edited by LuckyToSnort on Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:50 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Preparing for EOY English Compo :D (Suspicion)


Postby Zefe on Tue Sep 28, 2010 3:51 am

urm...... not bad....
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Re: Preparing for EOY English Compo :D (Suspicion)


Postby aaaaaaaaaaaaa on Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:19 pm

hmm i will rate 8/10
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Re: Preparing for EOY English Compo :D (Suspicion)


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